[personal profile] cosmolinguist
So here's what I wrote:

There's the story about the broken paintball gun,
And making tuna hotdish in the middle of the night.
So many stories, so many years, so much fun.
Without you here, nothing seems quite right.
We won't forget, though time moves on;
We're still telling your stories, laughing through tears.
We are only so sad that you are gone
Because we were so happy that you were here.

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Date: 2007-11-07 04:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] taimatsu
I'm not sure what to say, but don't want to say nothing. You're great, and this is very moving.

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Date: 2007-11-07 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] classytart.livejournal.com
It's lovely. Sad, and moving, and horrible that there's a reason for you to be writing it, but mostly it's lovely.

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Date: 2007-11-07 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donttouchmyhat.livejournal.com
I think it's very lovely too.

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Date: 2007-11-07 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rainmerlot.livejournal.com
very nice -Your mom is going to like it... I think it says so much. Thinking of you. Hugs.

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Date: 2007-11-07 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paninogirl.livejournal.com
Absolutely perfect. Those that don't know him will understand that he is loved and missed, and those that do know him will smile at the little inside jokes you have included in the poem and think of him fondly. :)

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Date: 2007-11-09 01:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ulffriend.livejournal.com
Cliches don't say anything about your brother, you, or your relationship. This is absolutely lovely and beats any Hallmark-wannabe by a mile.

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Date: 2007-11-09 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ulffriend.livejournal.com
I surely don't know your mom, but I can't imagine that it won't be of comfort to her. She managed to produce both you and your brother, after all. :)

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Date: 2007-11-08 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrs-leroy-brown.livejournal.com
This is really lovely. I'm a very new friends so I don't know your history but just wanted to say how sweet this is :)

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Date: 2007-11-08 11:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] k425.livejournal.com
That's very touching.

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